Megan and her shrink ray gun chapters 1-9 are up, I still need to edit certain details, but I’m interested in the opinions of people before I turn this into a comic script and make it into a graphic novel. I‘d like to know what I did right and wrong.
A lot of people have favorited it but nobody seems to comment on it. There will be three more chapters to conclude the story, but I plan on making the comic version later this summer.
I spent a lot of time revising chapter one of Megan and her Shrink Ray Gun, I tried to make it more realistic by getting rid of hyperspace and having the inertia dampeners be the reason the astronauts are propelled into the past from the year 3321 to the year 2008.
It shouldn’t be long before I’m finished scripting the first chapter, so I can use Procreate to draw the graphic novel version of this story. This is something I’ve been planning since 1999, and the story is finally coming together!
Let me know in the comments what you think of my revisions.